PLANNING: Plot for documentary

 

Crime documentary story (I will not be using an original story due to ethical and consensual reasons):

 

In 2011, a woman went missing from a small village called Castle Combe, after going for an evening walk with her 7-year-old daughter. The 7-year-old at the time was found along the bridge, by the river, unconscious. She was taken immediately to the hospital and put into an induced coma. There were no traces of the mother, Amber, found in the village and police were at a standstill. The case went cold after numerous attempts of exploring theories, using the little footage from a café they had. Conspiracists thought of ideas such as the mother had fallen into the lake and the daughter knocked her head on the way down with her. Others thought that Amber had been involved in some illegal business and people had taken action to take her down. But, 10 years later, the now 17-year-old girl, Olivia, has woken up from the coma, with a miracle of a memory considering her time asleep. She was able to recall the night almost perfectly.

 

"My mom and I had gone for a walk that evening. My dad had gone to pick my brother up from his football practice, which had become routine. We took our usual path, the only difference is that we left our dog, Rupert, at home. Mom and I stopped by a café to get a hot chocolate, considering how cold it was in November. As we were walking towards the river, my mom started to get jittery, she said she was just feeling extra cold. Suddenly, a dark shadow came and knocked me on the head with a rock from the river. I heard my mom scream. I was lying down with my eyes drifting in and out. All I could see was my mother being pushed and shoved into the back of a small car, then everything went black."

 

This development gave enough information for the police to be able to reopen the case. Making some developing advancements. The police were able to track down 87 cars that might have passed the village in that time period, using a CCTV camera from a road about 10 minutes away from the village. No other cameras were used in Castle Combe, since the area was small and everyone knew each other. After months of questioning and reviewing information, the car was found, but had been reported stolen right before the incident. However, in 2015, the car had been found, abandoned in an alleyway, with a wallet belonging to a J.A. Cambell, who had gone missing around the same time as Amber. J Cambell was found dead, near a loading zone in Bristol, the nearest city to the village in 2016.This led to CCTV footage being brought up to see that a J.L. Jones had done this, and was soon arrested and sent to prison after pleading guilty. More recently, Jones confessed that he had not done the crime but had been blackmailed into confessing for it. Jones described the place he had been instructed to pick up Miss Cambell from. DC T.Ryan followed this address where he found a large shipping container. In this container were 7 women, from all around England, who had been reported missing from the years 2011-2019, and were living in this container with no way out. They had been given water and food every couple of days over the years, but every few months, one woman would be taken out the container while sleeping and never seen again. The police took these women to the hospital to seek help and replaced them with undercover police, to see where they were taken. A few days later, one woman was taken, Undercover police officer, Jannet Evans, who was taken on a plane to an abandoned island off the coast of Africa, where there was only one mansion, no other buildings. There were however, 18 women who had been on the same island, and the man who had kidnapped the women and taken them to the mansion… Leo Thompson. Thompson was a 49-year-old, ex-marine from America. Who had become so lonely that he wanted company without being found. He would house the women and bring them over to the island slowly without being caught. In the mansion was all that the women needed to live, as well as an art studio, and full range of activities, yet had all been long-termly drugged to remain calm over the years. In this mansion was Amber Droll, the assumed dead woman who had been kidnapped. The women were all taken to hospital due to their slight malnourishment and dehydration, and long-term effects of these drugs, and after a few months of counselling and rehabilitation, were all reunited with their families. Including Amber Droll with her daughter Olivia, husband Pete and son Maxwell. Leo was put on trial in England and later sentenced to life in prison, with no option of parole.

 

This is all how a young girl, only 7 at the time, had woken up from a 10-year coma, and helped to save over 20 women, all from her miraculous memory.

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